So You Think You Can Write

MC Escher, Hands

So You Think You Can Write

Your pirouettes and penchées
are impeccable.

You have very clear lines.
Unfortunately you have nothing to say.

You should move out of your comfort zone.
Adapt to any genre.

That was so lyrical.
It took me to another world.

A bit cheesy. Lose the grin.
Otherwise, fine foot work.

In that one your crotch
was right in my face.

Congratulations.
Come and get your ticket.

You are the Biggest Loser.
Your dream ends now.

[from my just published collection The Post-Man Letters & Other Poems available at Picaro Press, cf. Blogroll]

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~ by Peter Lach-Newinsky on October 7, 2010.

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